2017年11月12日托福独立写作范文：Older teenagers (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job or not.( 17.11.12)
b.激发学生学习的兴趣：会有information gap 在学校学习的知识和兼职中的知识，会激发学生兴趣
I have the preference that older teenagers (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job.
First of all, it is beneficial to find what you are good at and what kind of person you want to be, in the process of doing part-time job, for teenagers of this age。 As we all know, adolescence is fueled by confusion and uncertainty, besides a pool of promising possibilities, and the only solution to this issue is how well we understand ourselves.
Second, part-time jobs offer teenagers not only salary for the first time in their life, moreimportantly, but also certain individual abilities,necessary to their future, such as communication ability, cooperation ability, and even financial ability、
Admittedly, abundant part-time jobs take up too much time and energy, which could be better used for academic study and health development.