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2017年10月15日托福独立写作范文:Most adults believe that modern children behave worse than those in the past

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2017年10月15日托福独立写作范文:Mostadultsbelievethatmodernchildren(5-10yearsold)behaveworsethanthoseinthepast.Whatactionparentsshouldtakedoyouthinkwillhavethemostpositiveeffectonc...

2017年10月15日托福独立写作范文:Most adults believe that modern children (5-10 years old) behave worse than those in the past. What action parents should take do you think will have the most positive effect on children to help them behave better like respecting and treating others kindly?

1. limiting the type of TV program and movies children watch 

2. spending more time to talk with kids 

3. supervising or monitoring children when they play with their friends. 


天道智思托福教研组思路点拨:

选择第一个选项-限制节目的类型

1.激发热爱学习的行为 > 监督孩子(家长没有时间)

a.科普类:(探索未知领域的兴趣)观看科普类的节目可以激发学生探索未知领域的兴趣。

b.人物类:(树立榜样,积极向上)人物类的节目可以让学生树立榜样,积极向上。而现在家长通常没时间监管孩子。

2.学习技能,改善行为 > 和孩子交谈

a.人际交往能力:(学会沟通,避免暴力粗鲁)可以看一定的电视节目来学会沟通,不去看那些暴力粗鲁的电视。

b.学会解决问题:(方法)通过学习电视里面的人面对困难的方式或学习解决问题的方法。


托福独立写作范文:

Never is educating children an easy thing. Particularly, today’s children are confronted with many harmful temptations and influences, leading to the undesirable result that some of them have bad behaviors like showing disrespect or saying vulgar language towards others. What can parents do to change this? Some parents try to set limitation to the TV programs and movies they watch, whereas some others decide to implement supervision or monitoring while they are interacting with their friends. In my opinion, for parents, sacrificing their spare time to actively and friendly communicate with their children is a more effective way.

By spending more time deeply communicating with them, parents can better understand their children and exert positive guidance. Only by personally communicating with their children can parents know what they are mostly interested in, what kinds of psychological confusions or growing pains they are experiencing, what kinds of friends they are socializing with, who are their favorite heroes and idols, or what they want to do in the future. If parents can patiently and adequately communicate these with their children like intimate friends, and at the same time by sharing parents’ personal anecdotes or telling the stories of positive role models, timely and imperceptibly guide their children with positive thinking and values, such as always being kind and polite to others, being an honest person, not speaking ill of others, always respecting teachers and elders, having a grateful heart, saving food and avoiding wasting and extravagance, and always being ready to help others. Then, gradually, children’s misconceptions and improper behaviors will be effectively corrected.

The other two ways in the three options are somewhat unfriendly and compulsory, which could backfire. As we all know, 5-10 years old children are in the psychologically rebellious stage when they tend to resist authority and deliberately or stealthily act against their parents’ supervision, monitoring or limitation by behaving confrontationally. For example, the more parents limit the types of TV programs or movies, the more they are likely to, out of curiosity and resistance, covertly watch those TV programs and movies when their parents are absent or when they are in their friends’ houses or other places. Likewise, the more parents commit supervision or monitoring when they are associating with their friends, the more likely, if they knew it, they could lose trust in their parents and even loathe their parents’ behaviors, becoming more rebellious and intractable. From news reports and in our everyday life, we often hear of stories about how parents’ strict discipline results in children’s rebellious behaviors, which in turn worsens their relationships with their parents. Therefore, these two mandatory or coercive approaches may lead to the vicious circle.

In the final analysis, faced with children’s undesirable behavior habits, compared with mandatory measures, such as limiting the types of TV programs or movies, and monitoring their interactions with their friends, directly speaking to or chatting with them in person is a gentler and more effective way.


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