2016年5月29日托福独立写作范文：It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people. (16.05.29)
Never do topics concerning the old fail to fascinate us in the modern society. A lot of people think that exploring new things are take the risk should be done by the old. I am one of the supporters of the point of view based on the following reasons.
Granted, the young are virtually a better choice for taking risks and exploring new things because they are relatively more courageous and curious about new things. New things is to the young as water is to the fish, since they are Interested in them, they can have better result for risk-related researching or experiments. Hence they are more efficient in those kinds of exploring. However, the young are not suitable for risks because they are too young.
The old should be responsible to take the risks and let the young be safe because they are the new generation who will be the supporters of the society. It is the young who will take over the hard mission of running the country in the future so that they cannot die or be hurt so badly in the exploring. For instance, if the medicine that will cure cancer is available but still need human experiment to test the medicine invented and the volunteers may be harmed or even die. The risks in this sort of exploring in medical field should be taken by the old. Because in this case the result is not depend on the quality of intellect and don’t have any requirements that is better to be done by the young so the two are both equal. Therefore, choosing the old is because they have shorter lives left.
Besides, the young is more creative and stronger to do hard works. If some of them die or hurt in accident in exploring, the old cannot replace them nor do their jobs because they are really significant. For example, if twenty scientists are needed to go to the South Pole for expedition, the relatively older scientists should do the job because it is so dangerous that if they do not come back safely, the nation will lose those supporters of the nation’s scientific department and the work cannot be replaced by the old. So we should let the old to take the risk.
To conclude, all reasons taken in account, we can safely reach the conclusion that the old should do risk-related explorations. It is because their life is shorter and the supporters of society cannot die. Besides, it can save labor force of the society because the old cannot do hard work.
Conventional wisdom generally believes that it is easier for young people to be exposed to innovative ideas and new concepts so that they can catch up with the current news and most up to date information. Elders, on the other hand, are supposed to relax and enjoy their retirement to the fullest extent. However, I have a totally different perspective on this issue and tend to believe that older people need to explore new things more than young people.
Admittedly, young people are generally more healthy and energetic than the elders, hence it is more likely for them to come up with new ideas and perspectives than elders. Indeed, as we can tell that professionals in different fields like scientists, business men, lawyers tend to have be more competitive and sharp when they are at a young age, actually, research shows that the average age of billionaires is well below 40. Nonetheless, it is more important for elders to stay touch with the latest trend and continue their lifelong learning.
First and foremost, continued learning makes it possible for elders to stay in touch with the currents and build a deeper connection with younger family members. The only thing that doesn't change in today's world is change itself, new electronic gadgets, innovative treatment to cure incurable diseases, creative business ideas and approaches that are unthinkable in the past, you name it. It can be disastrous if elders stop being an active learner and retreat to the primitive mindset. For instance, young people are fond of new electronic devices like ipad, iphone and stuff, and they use these gadgets to stay in touch with their peers and families. If a grandpa has not even heard of twitter or instagram, it will be impossible for the two generations to stay connected.
Additionally, a host of research done by a world famous psychiatrist show that elders who give up learning and have no access to new ideas tend to suffer from dementia and Alzheimer. On the other hand, other search shows that elders who keep learning will stay in touch with the world and are more healthier both physically and mentally. Based on my personal experience, I find elders around who are willing to learn and embrace new things are less dependent on their families and tend to be better connected with their children and grandchildren. Plus, they are more creative and productive when they access their frontal lobe and avoid their primitive mindset. Staying active and keeping exploring new things make it possible for seniors to seek for the true meaning and value of life, which in turn will inspire and motivate younger generation to take risks and accept challenges in life.
In a nutshell, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is better for elders to take risks and explore in new endeavors than the younger generations since it helps elders reconnect with their families and makes them more independent, productive and inspirational.