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2016/2/28托福独立写作范文:children rely too much on the technology like computers, smart phones, video games, for fun and entertainment

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2016年2月28日托福独立写作范文:Nowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnologylikecomputers,smartphones,videogames,forfunandentertainment;playingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidewithfriendsw

2016年2月28日托福独立写作范文:Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology like computers, smart phones, video games, for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children’s development. (16.02.28)

天道智思托福培训教研组解题思路:

玩简单玩具、跟朋友到外面玩

1.玩简单玩具好

a.能巩固课堂上学到的基础知识:可以巩固学校里所学的知识,比如计数、识字等,让孩子将学习的理论知识运用于实际

b.能激发学生主动探究而不是被动接受:在玩玩具的过程中可能会遇到问题,会产生information gap(现有的知识和解决问题所需要的知识),可以激发学生学习的兴趣

2. 跟朋友到外面玩好

a.身体健康:避免久坐,户外活动时间越长,孩子的肌肉就能得到锻炼,可以伸展身体,改善身体健康

b.心理健康:和朋友出去玩可以避免沉迷电脑游戏,也不会被家长批评,孩子不会有那么大的压力,因而心情放松

托福独立写作范文一:

 In the modern society, children have tremendous ways to entertain themselves. With the rapidly developing technology, an increasing number of high technological products come into people’s lives. And they have also become a critical component of the children’s daily lives. It is proposed that it is better for children’s development if they rely on the modern technology such as computers, smart phones and video games for fun. From my prospective, however, playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would provide many benefits to the kids.

First, social skills can be trained by playing outside with friends. In most cases, children seem having difficulties making friends with others simply because they do not like to play outside. It can be imagined that if a kid always plays with his friends who are at similar ages as him, he can gradually become open-minded. Children always get together discussing about their personal things such as their favorite toys, TV shows and comic books. During this process, the children learn to share their own opinions and listen to others carefully. And it is easier for a child to make friends with the ones who have the same interests.

Secondly, children can receive a lot of physical benefits by doing this. Unlike playing computer games, playing with toys is better for a child’s eyes. Computer game has become the main factor of the children’s near-sightedness. Also, kids can get much exercise by playing outside. Children love chasing each other, and it contains much running which is beneficial to the children’s health. Additionally, some toys have the requirements that the children have to assemble the spare parts together to make a toy in order to play it. Therefore, kids’ practical abilities are fostered during this process. 

Admittedly, many advantages can be brought to the child's access to the modern technological products. Children can learn to be creative and innovative after playing certain games on the smart device. They may start to know that how the devices operate and how the games work. But kids are also likely to receive the negative impacts from these products. According to the scientists, continuous computer playing has a strong connection with serious issues such as aggression, addiction and even death.

To sum up, it is safely to conclude that playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends is relatively more beneficial to the children. (36 min)


托福独立写作范文二::

For parents, how to well plan their children’s development has been a huge problem. While some children are given more time on technological gadgets, others are more inclined to choose some activities, such as going camping or traveling. For me, the former option would be a better one.

Admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choice for children. Simpler toys, namely Lego, are a good way to develop children’s thinking on solving the problem through block by block. By assembling the pieces for different blocks, children could assemble an even big piece, such as the classic London Tower Bridge. Also, playing with friends is helpful. When they are playing with others, they would cooperate with them to playing sports or even solve problems. However, on balance, both of these ways are limited in helping children. Toys and outdoor activities are restrained to their actual forms: parents need lots of money to buy different toys to help children develop, and they pay a great amount of money on helping their children for different activities. For those parents who suffer from financial burden, these are not effective ways for children’s development. Comparatively, technology would be a more effective way for children.

Firstly, Internet via computers and smartphone are essential for their development. In other words, Internet provides students with vast amounts of information. According to a recent survey conducted by Gallup, after polling thousands of students from local high schools, most respondents claim that Internet is the No.1 helper from them to finish homework. When they have problems, they would search reference on Internet. Websites such as Google Scholar would be a wonderful tool for them to find some papers or academic reference for their homework. Meanwhile, Internet is a wonderful place for them to entertain as well. They could watch movies on Youku.com. They could even find interesting stories on sina.com. All funny experiences are available on Internet without causing children too much money.

In addition, video games are also necessary for children’s growth. When children are playing video games, they might learn some strategic thinking. For example, when I am playing FIFA 2016, I have to manage my team members according to their physical strength so that I could beat other teams. For those who run quickly, it would be a good idea for them to play forward; for those who are tall and strong, they would be better playing middle field. Because of this team management strategy, I have achieved many titles in the game. Learning from this, I would allocate my time in finishing homework according to my energy level. When I am energetic, I might choose the most difficult homework; if I am tired, I might choose some easy-to-do tasks, which would not cost me much time.

To conclude, while playing toys or spending time on outdoor activities is a good way for their development, technology would be better way.


托福独立写作参考三:

Technological advancement has contributed to the invention of a wide range of electronic products and there are an increasing number of children who are reported to rely heavily on the technology. Thus, the controversy is raised among the public whether playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends are better for the children’s development. From my perspective, I insist on that depending on high technology is a rather right decision.

For one thing, children can learn more about the world and develop a better way of resolving problems. For instance, the upcoming Fourth Industrial Revolution heralds a thorough change of the composition of working force in the society and learning the latest news through computers or smartphones will lead children to be aware of what are needed urgently and what have been outdated, in this way, they can decide what kinds of capabilities and qualities they should develop for being accustomed to the fast-changing world. Besides, children nowadays have to accomplish diverse curriculums many difficult assignments like writing a paper related to how independent war was sparkled or what consequences had been aroused after the assassination of Lincoln. Computers can help resolve the problem more effectively by providing students with abundant references and historic documentation. Additionally, there have been more educational programs spreading through the Internet like TED that is designed to disseminate the most outstanding professors’ lectures throughout the world to share the greatest ideas with people in every corner of the world. Obviously, relying on the high-tech devices can be of great benefits for children both to resolve the problems they might meet during their study and learn more things beyond their textbooks.

For another thing, video games have been designed to be more alluring and intellectually demanding. To be more specific, there have occurred many more video games that are invented to exploit children’s imagination and also release their pressure. Take Minecraft, a popular game sweeping many primary and high school students, as an example. In the game, players can use diverse construction materials and tools to construct what they like such as a castle or a skyscraper even a city. Besides, by decorating the entities they created in many different styles, massive intellectual activities are needed like how to design the roof the house and where should put the pets in the city and etc. During the process, students can be fully occupied in the game, serving as an antidote to boredom that will be detrimental to students’ mental health if it can be erased promptly. Consequently, playing video games is a better choice for students to make to release their pressure and ensure their health.

Granted, I have to admit that playing outside with friends is also a better way of releasing pressure like playing sports that can help exercise children’s bodies to improve their physical quality. However, children might be injured while joining sports since they are lack of adequate physical exercises usually. However, playing video games will not trigger any possible injuries.

In a word, relying on technology is a better choice than playing simple toys or playing outside with friends for children’s development. Learning more out of the classroom, resolving academic problems as well as releasing workloads effectively can all reveal the superiority of relying on technology.


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