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2015/9/5托福独立写作范文:In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.

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2015年9月5日托福独立写作范文:Inordertoattractmoretourists,governmentshouldimprovethesafetybyhiringmorepoliceorimprovetheappearancebyimprovingtheoldbuildingsandstreets.天道智思托福...

2015年9月5日托福独立写作范文:In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.

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改善城市风貌

1.老建筑吸引学生游客

a.学生能获得更多历史知识:老建筑可以让学生直观感受到历史的痕迹,学到更多古建筑的历史知识,会吸引更多学生游客

b.能激发学生探究历史的兴趣:老建筑体现了过去人们的生活场景、文化背景灯,激发学生探究历史的兴趣,从而吸引更多学生游客来考察研究

2.美丽的街道吸引成人游客

a.吸引大众,因为可以放松:修缮街道,使整个城市更加干净美观,就会吸引更多的游客前来观光,放松身心

b.吸引商人来投资:美丽的街道会吸引商人来投资,形成小吃街、工艺品街等,进而吸引更多游客

托福独立写作范文一:

When talking about traveling, I believe the importance of safety should be paid more attention to than the appearance of tourist attractions.

We all know that Paris used to be one of the top tourist destinations. But nowadays, it is not as attractive as before. One of the reasons is the safety issue. The news of people being robbed under the Eiffel Tower in the daylight have often been heard. The crime rate in Paris has been climbing higher as the tourist business plunging. It can be seen that people will take into account whether it’s safe or not when they plan traveling. The Paris government should have known by now how important it is to have a safe environment for tourists.

Some people will argue that the appearance of a place has more appeal than the safety. I have a different opinion. The history of a city is reflected in the old buildings and streets. The antique atmosphere is the very essence of the local culture. Therefore, if the appearance of the streets and buildings are improved, they no longer can attract the tourists because they lose all the cultural and historical touch.

Last but not least, travelers nowadays not satisfied with merely sightseeing. There are a variety of activities that they want to do, such as shopping at local markets and experiencing everyday life in a new place. If they know this place is not safe, they will need to worry about their wallets being stolen or themselves being in danger all the time. In this way, the traveler will not be able to enjoy the stay or even the scenery.


托福写作范文二:

托福写作范文:

Nowadays, for the economic development of a city, the government place undue emphasis on how to boost its tourism industry. While some experts show their enthusiasm on selling their cities to outside tourists by publicizing good social security via recruiting more police, I hold a different opinion. From my perspective, improving old buildings and streets is a better alternative.

Admittedly, hiring more police might be useful in attracting tourists. When government is focusing on recruiting more policemen, these new recruiters would be helpful in improving social security standards. Thanks to the improved standards, more visitors might be relieved about the city when paying a visit to the city; hence the the city reputation would be enhanced. However, on balance, only focusing on police while not improving building places of interest is not enough. Without places about culture or places for amusement parks, visitors still would not come even if social security is good. To attract more visitors, a more effective way would be to improve olds buildings.

To begin with, improving old buildings helps preserve old cultures. In other words, more visitors would love to visit places with cultural value so the maintenance of old buildings is attractive to them. For example, when Beijing government begins to repair the Great Wall, the symbol of diligence of ancient Chinese people, the experts pay great attention on building the wrecked walls and restoring some stone relics. Meanwhile, they reshape some broken bricks for the steps so that visitors could step onto the Great Wall. As a result, an increasing number of visitors from foreign countries come to Beijing to watch the marvelous Great Wall building on top of piles of mountains. On the contrary, if hiring more police, though government would gain reputation for their good management in social security, it would not add to any cultural attraction.

In addition, improving the streets makes it convenient for tourists. That's is to say, tourists would love to visit places with convenient facilities. According to a survey conducted on Sina Weibo, after polling hundreds of tourists from the National Holiday, a significant percentage of them claim that when deciding a place as their touring destination, they are more likely to choose a city with broader streets. In their minds, when the city is built with convenient streets and beautiful auxiliary facilities, this urban planning would give tourists a sense of modernism and make them feel go into colorful metropolitan life. With these perfect streets, public transport would be convenient for them to visit both in city and around city.

To sum up, due to the reasons I lost above, I would regard that by perfecting streets and maintaining old buildings, government would be more likely to attract tourists to visit the city.


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